Winter’s End by Jacqueline Nash

I am now on SoundCloud and this is my first attempt at narrating one of my own poems. This is slightly outside my comfort zone but I was determined to give it a go. It does seem to come through quite loud so you might need to turn the sound down a little. I hope it’s not too cringe making. The written version is below if you prefer.

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Winter’s End

Winter has come
and I am still alive,
but what was left of my bloom
has faded,
and I struggle
within my insignificance.

The future hides it’s face from
my sight
and the now is such an empty
place to be,
so all I am left with
are my memories of yesterday.

I had not thought
the cold would come so soon,
to take me in it’s grip
and squeeze the life from me.

I had expected so much more
than this.

So much more than this.

The wheel has turned;
my life hanging
between the spokes
as it moves swiftly towards
Winter’s end.

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13 Responses to Winter’s End by Jacqueline Nash

  1. jcnashpoems says:

    Thank you so much Pratyusha, very happy you like it 🙂

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  2. noblethemes says:

    Very, very good! You have such a lovely voice, and I like the poem very much, as well as your choice of the beautiful tapestry to compliment your work!

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  3. jcnashpoems says:

    Thank you very much Jonathan for your kind comments, quite a relief, I was very nervous of putting this on today, spoken word does not come naturally to me 🙂

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  4. Swapnil says:

    The way you write with stark simplicity and yet beautifully is really appreciable. Good work! 🙂

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  5. jcnashpoems says:

    Thank you so much, your comments are much appreciated 🙂

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  6. maryc25 says:

    Jacqueline, please continue on SoundCloud. I have just listened to Echo and Winter’s End. You narrate them beautifully.

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  7. jcnashpoems says:

    Thank you so much Mary, you don’t know how much that means to me. I shall definitely be recording more – watch this space xxx

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  8. deuxiemepeau says:

    Well done, I was just talking to a friend recently about how when I write a poem, I wonder how others read it, if they hear it as I hear it. Probably not, been thinking about doing the same for a while now. Congratulations- keep going- I really enjoyed listening

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  9. jcnashpoems says:

    Thank you Damien. I think everybody reads poems in their own way and read into them what they want. A friend of mine doesn’t like reading poems but enjoys listening to them, we’re all so different. Pleased you enjoyed listening, there will be some more coming soon.

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  10. both the poem and the reading of it are splendid

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  11. jcnashpoems says:

    Thank you so much for your kind words, much appreciated.

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